My Brand New Video Game Review Show On Youtube!

[facemeat]

Please rate/comment.:bouncy:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=1wqa4-UTllo

[projecteightysix]

Did you just run a marathon? or a few steps?

And why do you keep trying to talk so low that your voice cracks? You do it pretty much every sentence.

[AHEADAMUS]

Nice to see you trying your hand at something new, but a lot of ways to improve.

Using profanity just doesn't sound all that natural for you. Maybe it's how you really talk, but it doesn't sound that bad ass here.

Improve your scoresheet style/quality.

Actually try to project your voice. This only gets better with time, but right now you have an odd cadence (beginning high pitched to end low pitched and slow).

[pimpinc333]

Your glasses pinch your nose too much. How can I tell you ask? By the way you talk and your shortness of breath. If I am wrong and you don't wear glasses then it sounds liek you nose is plugged up. You also talk like one of my fat super nerdy friends from Middle School. Good Luck to you :)

[MillerTime2523]

I like it.. the other CAGs bring up some good points, but nice job!

[Michaellvortega]

Pretty good! Put a little work into the production of the videocast and it will be top notch. Don't take the others criticism too hard.

[facemeat]

Your glasses pinch your nose too much. How can I tell you ask? By the way you talk and your shortness of breath. If I am wrong and you don't wear glasses then it sounds liek you nose is plugged up. You also talk like one of my fat super nerdy friends from Middle School. Good Luck to you :)
I don't know why my voice always sounds like this when I record it! I sound nothing like this in real life. And yes, I do wear glasses.

[Brak]

I don't know why my voice always sounds like this when I record it! I sound nothing like this in real life. And yes, I do wear glasses.
Try not to imitate an announcer's voice, or whatever.

(I record news and weather for a radio station -- trust me)

[Roufuss]

Your glasses pinch your nose too much. How can I tell you ask? By the way you talk and your shortness of breath. If I am wrong and you don't wear glasses then it sounds liek you nose is plugged up. You also talk like one of my fat super nerdy friends from Middle School. Good Luck to you :)

:rofl:

I can't stop laughing since I read this first and then watched the video.

[lordwow]

I don't know why my voice always sounds like this when I record it! I sound nothing like this in real life. And yes, I do wear glasses.

Heh. But you do realize that your ears are recieving sound that isn't being directly projected at them (aka your natural voice goes away from your ears). Thus, the microphone is picking up a sound that is more like what others hear, and thus possibly more accurate than what your ears hear of your own voice.

[facemeat]

Heh. But you do realize that your ears are recieving sound that isn't being directly projected at them (aka your natural voice goes away from your ears). Thus, the microphone is picking up a sound that is more like what others hear, and thus possibly more accurate than what your ears hear of your own voice.
Other people have told me I don't sound like this as well.

[FallMoon]

Your nose does sound a bit plugged, and your voice sounds like it is in the middle of transitioning, so that may be a problem. Like, after it gets a bit deeper, it will probably sound great.

[brianmiami]

Sounds like you were running out of oxygen.

[iazybandit]

Sounds like Bert and Ernie.

[doctorfaustus]

Sounds like Bert and Ernie.

That's what I thought.

To the OP:

Nice first attempt. I think you need to work on being more lively and presenting the review in an interesting manner. As it stands, your delivery is kind of mundane and lacking a certain level of polish that one expects from a spoken review. Your voice was a bit uneven and all over the place which makes it hard sit through. It also sounded like you were trying to speak in a different manner. I recommend you try it again in a more casual, relaxed manner in an attempt to develop your own voice.
I say this not to discourage you, but to provide some sort of constructive criticism. Good luck in the future!

[Ender]

Not bad buddy! I agree with some of the criticisms though.

Your voice does come off pretty nasal, which is annoying to me. And yea, your delivery is not interesting enough. Work on those two. Also, cut out the profanity altogether. Talking that way with your friends is one thing; putting it into something like this just sounds amateur.

Good first try man. Keep improving.

[sayHey]

for gods sake, I hope you don't sound like this in real life.

Out of the 30 seconds I watched, The wordplay was good, but I just could not stand your voice, sorry.

[coldwine]

Clean up the technical issues (heavy breathing) and drop the profanities - it makes you sound like an idiot.

I think you're off to a good start though, I would check out your next batch of reviews.

[linkpwns]

Just one complaint... apparently every game you reviewed was great, and apparently all had AMAZING graphics....

I don't mind your voice because I am not like that

But you do need to sound more lively

[afedock]

I just watched it, not bad but your voice sounds pretty annoying man. Work on that aspect or get a better mic or something.

[phutu]

inexperienced, bad sound, bad pictures, bad reviews, my final verdict is 2/10 for courage. sorry man i speak the truth :(