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nneace
05-10-2004, 10:04 PM
here it is...its somewhat morbid, but here goes:
- Men always wonder why is it that women always want to date you when you are involved with someone – that’s easy. It’s because you don’t say what you feel; you say what they want to hear. The façade we put up is just the bullshit they want to hear.
- But when we are alone, that’s when we are ourselves, we don’t have to lie, or hold our tongues simply for the benefit of those around us. A struggling relationship is like an incredibly long hallway. You see the door at the end, and you make your way towards it hoping that soon you will shove that 2-inch thick piece of hanging Formica ajar, and be liberated. So you gradually make your way down the hallway, taking in the newness of this premarital union. Yet after a few hundred steps, the natural light given off by the sun that permeates the blinds on the sides of the hallway start to dim; no the sun isn’t fading or going down for the evening, it is just getting a little darker. So the fluorescent lights start to kick in, and shine vibrantly causing a brief moment of euphoric bliss. With your ability to see your destination unhindered, you continue the almost “descent” towards to door. Gradually those overhead fluorescent lights start to pulsate and blink, faster and faster until the dim almost to black. And your road to the end seems more difficult; however you can still make out the door at the end. You then start to notice a feeling of suffocation, as the walls creep ever so close. They move, or so it feels, closer to the center. However, they don’t move until your eyes are no longer fixated on them. They creep when your back is turned, slowly, until you have to walk sideways to get through the hallway. And though this hallway has the same area as it held during its rectangular shape; its dimensions have changed dramatically. Where there was once freedom to roam, is now no more. The new dimensions resemble a new, elongated hallway. The length reminds one of The Lincoln Tunnel, and the new width can be closely compared to the width of a new born infant’s big toe. Suffocation is a luxury compared to this bottleneck predicament. As you move closer to the door you realize why the suffocation has occurred. Its not the outside restraints put on you by others, it’s the amount of stress and pressure you put on yourself to make the other person happy. And when that is not reciprocated, the effects are almost disastrous.
- Loneliness then is the pinnacle of realness. Only when you are alone can you be real. For pleasure masturbation then becomes the vehicle of self-exploration and acceptance. If one can’t be satisfied with their body, who else would be? This is when all the preconceived notions of happiness are realized. We can for once be honest with ourselves. When masturbating, you can’t lie about the size or girth of your penis (or lack thereof). And you can’t run, hide, or blur your thoughts and feelings because you know what they are and what you ultimately want.
- Yes loneliness brings despair, apathy, and resentment towards those who are in “love.” But who cares? You have reason, logic, honesty, and masturbation. What is love? A word to describe an emotion? No, it’s an ideological excuse to deal with loneliness. It’s a drug. But it isn’t addicting, in the drug sense, as in you don’t need it to survive. Without it one doesn’t feel the need to kill themselves, or if without this drug they won’t be able to function properly in our rapidly changing and evolving society. It’s addicting because we as a society and a generation are addicted to pain. What other thing in this world causes so much hurt. But then the old adage always comes in; “it is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all.” And while yes that’s true, what does love really do? It creates unnecessary emotional attachments that attempt to change us and fabricate a reality of peril, self-acceptance, lust, fear, and a lack of self worth. We become so inundated with what the other person wants, we lose sight of who we are and what we ultimately want. But that’s not entirely true. Yes we lust in love. And we fear losing love. And we attempt to define our existence by what the other person wants and feels. But that’s not always true. Usually one person gets the short end of the stick, and does a majority of the work in a relationship.
And that’s the worst thing…and unreciprocated feeling. The feeling that you are second best in a union that is supposed to be 50-50. And we can deal with it if it is 45-55, or maybe even 40-60. But when those numbers dip to 25-75 and 20-80, the pressure becomes unbearable. All this ranting is the effects and aftermath from a bad relationship, and from a sour, arsenic, rough old man. Take it for what its worth.

pukemon
05-10-2004, 10:10 PM
sounds like you need a bottle of whiskey and maybe a cheap ass whore.

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:12 PM
yeah no whiskey...now vodka now your talking. it was a long relationsip and needed to vent, figured maybe it would make someone laugh

spoo
05-10-2004, 10:12 PM
sounds like you need a bottle of whiskey and maybe a cheap ass whore.
Yes, all you need is a strong drink.

Steggy
05-10-2004, 10:15 PM
well... ill down a bottle of uv right now in your name. I know how gettin dumped feels. I got dumped on my bday a year ago... which is coming up may 26th...

pukemon
05-10-2004, 10:16 PM
i know how you feel. i just got rid of a materialistic, hypocritical, lazy ass bitch myself a month ago. man, it's good to find myself and have freedom again.

drunken_master
05-10-2004, 10:16 PM
GOLDEN

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:18 PM
i know how you feel. i just got rid of a materialistic, hypocritical, lazy ass bitch myself a month ago. man, it's good to find myself and have freedom again.

its dope when people agree with you! yeah but women are like a crapshoot, and sometimes you just need to fold the hand your dealt. or by the way, i dumped her in response to basketcase

SpookyD
05-10-2004, 10:27 PM
Even though it was all angisty and morbid it was written pretty well. While being alone does seem like the awnser a whole ton, I can only guess it isn't because of how few single middleaged people there are, but then again mabye they are just trying to grab at whatever they can so they wont be alone their whole life. I know its rought to be in a dying relationship, I think i'm in one right now. Take your time in life though, you'll find that special someone eventualy, or at least someone you can deal with :wink:

DesertEagleXIX
05-10-2004, 10:28 PM
It feels great to taste freedom again after being with a particularly restrictive woman. I was with a woman who hated that I was in the service. I had to hide my pics, hold my tongue, and sell (gasp) my guns and games. I thought that part of my life was behind me; i had to grow up and move on.

Fuck that and her, too.

I got a new woman; she's not happy I still love my jarhead days; she think video games are a waste of time. But she understands that's what I'm into. She doesn't try to change me and encourages me to talk with my old Corp buddies.

There is hope. Until then, there's Jack Daniels.

Best of Luck, Buddy/

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:31 PM
It feels great to taste freedom again after being with a particularly restrictive woman. I was with a woman who hated that I was in the service. I had to hide my pics, hold my tongue, and sell (gasp) my guns and games. I thought that part of my life was behind me; i had to grow up and move on.

shaq-fu that and her, too.

I got a new woman; she's not happy I still love my jarhead days; she think video games are a waste of time. But she understands that's what I'm into. She doesn't try to change me and encourages me to talk with my old Corp buddies.

There is hope. Until then, there's Jack Daniels.

dude dont lose that one a definite keeper

Best of Luck, Buddy/

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:31 PM
Even though it was all angisty and morbid it was written pretty well. While being alone does seem like the awnser a whole ton, I can only guess it isn't because of how few single middleaged people there are, but then again mabye they are just trying to grab at whatever they can so they wont be alone their whole life. I know its rought to be in a dying relationship, I think i'm in one right now. Take your time in life though, you'll find that special someone eventualy, or at least someone you can deal with :wink:
thanks for the compliment, i am trying to write some books and stuff (not on this macabre topic of course) so we will see.

SpookyD
05-10-2004, 10:33 PM
I think you've got tallent, it didn't reak of cheap goth atidude, and even though it was emotional it was written really well, good luck on your writing.

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:35 PM
I think you've got tallent, it didn't reak of cheap goth atidude, and even though it was emotional it was written really well, good luck on your writing.

sweet i am not goth so right on!! hears a cheap shamless plug
ANYONE NEED THE SERVICES OF A WRITER? PM ME!

DesertEagleXIX
05-10-2004, 10:37 PM
Nneace,

Do you attend UCR?

I lived in San Bernardino...

snotknocker
05-10-2004, 10:39 PM
You need to elaborate on your situation. You go into this deep philosophical banter about stroking the monkey and doors at the end of the hallway, lonlieness stuff. It was like a Oprah Winfrey meets Rob Zombie kinda a thing (morbid indeed). You got me wondering why she dumped you. Spill it!

nneace
05-10-2004, 10:40 PM
Nneace,

Do you attend UCR?

I lived in San Bernardino...
i guess my response to your last post didnt go thru, i said keep that girl you have shes a winner man! um i go to a small private school in riverside, like down the street in ucr

jeffreyjrose
05-10-2004, 10:54 PM
Hey, there's always more time for videogames, and they don't bitch or complain.

sj41
05-10-2004, 11:06 PM
Hey, there's always more time for videogames, and they don't bitch or complain. You've never played online, have you? :lol:

XboxMaster
05-10-2004, 11:12 PM
I read about 2/3 of it. I couldn't read anymore of it, too long. Anyway, I can't really relate, :lol: , but I do know that was some good writing, so I compliment you on you writing now. Good day!

karmapolice
05-10-2004, 11:23 PM
Hey thanks...no really...Ive been egging this relationship too long...ive lost all my friends (well most) and I dont do anything anymore...as you can tell since im an allstar and only joined in march...thank you in helping me face the fact its over...and theres no way to go but out...

Spruce
05-10-2004, 11:47 PM
Yes loneliness brings despair, apathy, and resentment towards those who are in “love.” But who cares? You have reason, logic, honesty, and masturbation.

I like that...it actually made me laugh. In fact, I may go so far as to make it my first sig if you don't mind. heh...

jeffreyjrose
05-10-2004, 11:55 PM
Hey, there's always more time for videogames, and they don't bitch or complain. You've never played online, have you? :lol:

Lol; I suppose I should edit my comment to read "single-player" games, or games with muting ability. Good call sj41!

jalu6
05-11-2004, 12:10 AM
wow, its about time that CAG started getting all emo. enough of all this "gamers with wives and girlfriends" garbage.

nneace
05-11-2004, 12:13 AM
Hey thanks...no really...Ive been egging this relationship too long...ive lost all my friends (well most) and I dont do anything anymore...as you can tell since im an allstar and only joined in march...thank you in helping me face the fact its over...and theres no way to go but out...
regain control of you life, give in to the power of the games and friends. think peer pressure
and if or when u break it off, if you start to feel bad keep reminding yourself of all the times she hurt you or was a bitch! it always helps

pukemon
05-11-2004, 01:56 AM
i'd rather have a chic that bitches about my videogames than one that plays videogames and bitched about every single fucking thing she could think of. goodbye you miserable human being.

The Successful Dropout
05-11-2004, 06:02 AM
a good ol "get over a bitch, i hate her anyway" mixed cd usually does the trick for me

JSweeney
05-11-2004, 07:44 AM
Gah! IT BURNS! IT BURNS!!
This entire topic makes me want to go all "Grammar Nazi" on it!

ElwoodCuse
05-11-2004, 09:35 AM
tl;dr

you're better off without her

x0thedeadzone0x
05-11-2004, 09:46 AM
See, what you guys need is a nice girl from CAG. That way, she won't bitch at you for playing videogames, and she'll be nice. I'm telling you, we should set up a cheapassdating.com. It was a good idea.
That way you can see A. How bitchy EVERY women can be , game girl or not, and B. How much we love video games just like the guys. Hell, look for the girls that will play your favorite games like vice city. And then you can blow heads off together (how romantic)
You're a good writer. But your whole conceptuality on love is wrong and twisted because you were just in a relationship. love can be a beautiful thing if you find the right person, so it's not exactly safe to assume that all girls act and are materialistic and suffocating like your other. As the old saying goes, there's plenty of fish out there in the sea.
</end old fart rant>

nneace
05-11-2004, 03:18 PM
oh yeah like in now way is this an all-encompassing bitch fest about every women in the world; it just pertains to the one i broke up with. i know damn well there are hot chicas out there that are the antithesis of what i had with my ex. i was just bitter and wanted to bitch! and about the whole cagdating thing...that just seems weird. but whatever

maxflight
05-11-2004, 03:25 PM
See, what you guys need is a nice girl from CAG. That way, she won't bitch at you for playing videogames, and she'll be nice. I'm telling you, we should set up a cheapassdating.com. It was a good idea.
That way you can see A. How bitchy EVERY women can be , game girl or not, and B. How much we love video games just like the guys. Hell, look for the girls that will play your favorite games like vice city. And then you can blow heads off together (how romantic)
You're a good writer. But your whole conceptuality on love is wrong and twisted because you were just in a relationship. love can be a beautiful thing if you find the right person, so it's not exactly safe to assume that all girls act and are materialistic and suffocating like your other. As the old saying goes, there's plenty of fish out there in the sea.
</end old fart rant>

lol cheapassdating.com we gotta tell cheapyd to get working on this =)

carlagyrl
05-11-2004, 04:19 PM
Wow...you really need just a night on the town. I've never felt bad about dumping anyone. And I have never been dumped. I have only been in one serious realtionship and I'm marrying the guy.

rimsforsale
05-11-2004, 05:12 PM
riverside gurls are the worse.

6669
05-11-2004, 05:26 PM
:( That was sweet, nneace. If she read this, she would probably think twice about whatever happened between you to. Good luck in the future, you have a good, yet honest, heart.