Recent content by Jacko1

the entire conclusion was mediocre at best and by putting doubt into the topic creator's mind as to whether or not he should use it I have saved him from a shitty paper correcting a paragraph so horribly fucked up will probably still turn out fucked up. I have accomplished that which I set out...

Indeed, it is fine to do that online being as the point is to goof off and whatnot. However, most of the time when people use 1337 speak others are able to interpret the meaning. I am just not able to grasp any sort of meaning out of that...sentence.

That paragraph is hardly "professional", I would not say that it's bad but it could be better. Your grammar in the opening sentence of your response is so horrific that I am having trouble understanding your meaning. May I ask for a clarification sir/ma'am? Yes, we have accomplished what we...

"[T]ried to disprove middle-school grammar"? Also, I was not saying that your revisions made it weak. I was simply saying that one could conclude the paper better than that. Oh...and my final correction of the paragraph is the most correct, but it's his grade so I guess if he wants to get an...

also, I find it rather condescending when you say "your little handbook" but that may just be a misinterpretation on my part

here is the correct paragraph: For the most part, the representation of men and women in the media has a negative effect on society. Most men feel as if they are allowed more privileges than women and that they are superior; a sense of power they often abuse. Also, most women feel compelled to...

you have commas that are not needed like in front of the "and" and "or". Your paragraph was incorrect and mine may be as well. Mine, however, is more correct.

For the most part, the representation of men and women in the media has a negative effect on society. Most men feel they are allowed more privileges than women, that they are superior; a sense of power they often abuse and most women feel compelled to conform to that of the image of digitally...

1.) I generally start my essays off with a narrative. This acts to pull the reader in and make for a more interesting experience. Also, doing this lengthens your paper >_> 2.) Check all your sentences that start with "It", I forget the exact rule that this corresponds with, but I think it...