[quote name='slidecage']OK i spelled MaLL wrong (though i did see a mailman in the mall)[/quote]
It's not just that. Let's look at your subject:
"Back from the maLL and around the mail didnt do too bad i dont think"
You capitalized letters you shouldn't have, but didn't capitalize the 'I'. The subject is composed of three sentences abbreviated and jammed together in a way that makes very little sense. Punctuation would have helped, but what's really called for is just a subject that would make sense. Something like:
"Back from bargain hunting - check out my purchases!"
Let's continue to the body of your post:
"GOt 3 Jampacks for a penny each woooo but the biggest thing is picked up a game called SEA TRADER for the GBA Never seen it before and GOt it using my 30% off coupon at EBGames for 2.84
ANyone know if the game is good. not bad 3 bucks for a GBA game and 3 jampacks "
You again suffer from random capitalization syndrome, the word 'I' is missing at least twice, the sentences are again mashed together like so many potatoes. The events which took place seem to be physical things with actual sizes, and you ask a question without using a question mark (and forget its first word).
Some problems wouldn't be too bad by themselves, but taken together your post doesn't really work out . Your story becomes secondary since most people could not tear their eyes away from the train wreck that is your grammar.
No offense, kid.
