I had a really bad experience that I've chronicled over at http://www.cheapassgamer.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=35453&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=400 and I'm putting a letter together to send to corporate. I just would like some suggestions for alterations or what I can add to the letter. Any constructive suggestions/criticism is welcome.
Dear (whoever),
I am writing you to express disappointment and concern regarding my trip to your Toys R' Us store in Colorado Springs on the morning of Sunday, October 24th. I had come to your store to take advantage of your Buy 2, Get 1 free sale on video games. I wanted to make sure that I would have a good selection to choose from, so I arrived at about 10:50am, which is ten minutes before the store opens on Sundays. When the store opened, I went straight back to the "R Zone" to get some games, and I saw somebody being checked out with a couple carts full of games. At first, I thought that it might be a transfer of some games to a Denver store because I'm sure that all your stores were anticipating being swamped with such a sale. I attempted to pick out three games, but you were unfortunately completely out of stock on both versions of Mortal Kombat: Deception, even though your store had cases indicating stock on the shelves. At this time, I heard another customer become rather aggravated about something, so I went to find out what was going on.
At this time, I discovered that the person I thought was may have been getting a stock transfer, was actually purchasing what ended up being almost $30,000 in games, in a purchase of almost $29,000 and a second purchase of almost $300. I thought I may have mis-read the display, but the gentleman sounded rather proud of this fact, as he will be able to make a good amount of money reselling these games. It was then that this person said that he had an arrangement with the management of the store to get in before opening and purchase the games every year. Unfortunately, he purchased just about every new game you had in stock. Instead of having the good selection that should come with being one of the first people to get in the store the morning the sale started, I had the selection I would have expected if I had come in at 4pm on the Saturday of the sale. The only game you had in stock that I wanted was Burnout 3, which is a far cry from what I expected to see.
From what I have read on various internet message boards, I thought that management had been instructed to stop exactly this kind of thing from happening in the interests of better serving your customers. The fact that this gentleman expressly said that he was going to resell these games confuses me even more. In the unlikely event that this was approved through management, then I think your store has done a completely unacceptable job of keeping stock. If you knew this person was coming in, I would think that you would be prepared and have more stock so that customers like myself would not have to feel that they wasted a trip specifically to your store, when I could have come back later in the week and had the same and probably even a better selection. My trip to your store was the only time I left the house Sunday. What was supposed to be a relaxing day with a quick trip out ended up in my spending close to an hour waiting to find games I could actually buy, and leaving utterly disgusted and dissatisfied.
This experience has essentially destroyed any thoughts of customer service that I may have had with Toys R Us. I have told several friends about this experience including some people who run various game discussion boards, and they have all said that they may not shop with Toys R Us again if this is not dealt with properly.
I truly hope that this has been a mistake and that you will go to some lengths to make sure it never happens again, because I really appreciate the value that Toys R Us makes available to shoppers like myself.
Dear (whoever),
I am writing you to express disappointment and concern regarding my trip to your Toys R' Us store in Colorado Springs on the morning of Sunday, October 24th. I had come to your store to take advantage of your Buy 2, Get 1 free sale on video games. I wanted to make sure that I would have a good selection to choose from, so I arrived at about 10:50am, which is ten minutes before the store opens on Sundays. When the store opened, I went straight back to the "R Zone" to get some games, and I saw somebody being checked out with a couple carts full of games. At first, I thought that it might be a transfer of some games to a Denver store because I'm sure that all your stores were anticipating being swamped with such a sale. I attempted to pick out three games, but you were unfortunately completely out of stock on both versions of Mortal Kombat: Deception, even though your store had cases indicating stock on the shelves. At this time, I heard another customer become rather aggravated about something, so I went to find out what was going on.
At this time, I discovered that the person I thought was may have been getting a stock transfer, was actually purchasing what ended up being almost $30,000 in games, in a purchase of almost $29,000 and a second purchase of almost $300. I thought I may have mis-read the display, but the gentleman sounded rather proud of this fact, as he will be able to make a good amount of money reselling these games. It was then that this person said that he had an arrangement with the management of the store to get in before opening and purchase the games every year. Unfortunately, he purchased just about every new game you had in stock. Instead of having the good selection that should come with being one of the first people to get in the store the morning the sale started, I had the selection I would have expected if I had come in at 4pm on the Saturday of the sale. The only game you had in stock that I wanted was Burnout 3, which is a far cry from what I expected to see.
From what I have read on various internet message boards, I thought that management had been instructed to stop exactly this kind of thing from happening in the interests of better serving your customers. The fact that this gentleman expressly said that he was going to resell these games confuses me even more. In the unlikely event that this was approved through management, then I think your store has done a completely unacceptable job of keeping stock. If you knew this person was coming in, I would think that you would be prepared and have more stock so that customers like myself would not have to feel that they wasted a trip specifically to your store, when I could have come back later in the week and had the same and probably even a better selection. My trip to your store was the only time I left the house Sunday. What was supposed to be a relaxing day with a quick trip out ended up in my spending close to an hour waiting to find games I could actually buy, and leaving utterly disgusted and dissatisfied.
This experience has essentially destroyed any thoughts of customer service that I may have had with Toys R Us. I have told several friends about this experience including some people who run various game discussion boards, and they have all said that they may not shop with Toys R Us again if this is not dealt with properly.
I truly hope that this has been a mistake and that you will go to some lengths to make sure it never happens again, because I really appreciate the value that Toys R Us makes available to shoppers like myself.