As far as I'm concerned, video RPG LPs are a
ing abomination unto the LORD. That shit is screenshot LP territory, with videos only used for Important Shit and cutscenes and whatnot. I'll take a wee look and see how you handle it, anyway.
EDIT: Are you doing your commentary as you go, or is it entirely in post? Because if it's the former, stop. Save the talking for when you're not playing. Have some idea of what you want to talk about. And get a partner. Video LPs have a lot of dead space where nothing much happens. Video RPG LPs have about 75% dead
ing space, so you will need at least one person with you. Slowbeef and Diabetus, Chip and Ironicus (or Chip and Void; they have really good chemistry), Proteus and Suspicious, Pokecapn and his group (Medibot, KFJ, etc.).
The fact that you're experienced with the game you're doing is good, though. Blind LPs are a gimmick. As far as partners go, mixing one experienced person with one inexperienced person can be great.
Don't read their dialogue.
But srsly, I've never met a video RPG LP I liked. And it's a turn-based one, too. At least with, like, an Elder Scrolls game or some shit you can do a bunch of editing and at least have some semblance of pacing. But... Suikoden just does not work in that format. Look at the LP archive and compare the number of screenshot RPG LPs to video RPG LPs. Of the 28 Final Fantasy LPs,
2 are entirely video-based. All Fire Emblem LPs are screenshot based. Same for Front Mission, Neverwinter Knights, KotOR, and Bard's Tale. That shit is not coincidental.