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I have an essay about "Animal Farm" and the Russian Revolution due tommorow.. And Im not extactly sure how I should finish it.. Here it is for now..
“Title here”
“Animal Farm,” written by George Orwell, is an allegory of the Russian Revolution. There were many different and intriguing characters. Including but not limited to Boxer the mindlessly strong horse, Mollie the weak and human dependent horse, and Benjamin the depressed donkey. They all played their valuable roles in Animal Farm and if all of the animals worked together they could have prevented anything terrible from happening, but seeing as they didn’t everything fell apart. And the one that destroyed “Animalism” is Napoleon, a pig, who was modeled after the Historical figure Joseph Stalin. (Animalism is the theory that all animals are created equal) Napoleon, like Stalin, was a “sleeper.” A sleeper is one who appears to be weak but then takes you by surprise and takes over. Neither Napoleon nor Stalin ever made a move until they were ready. Both leaders soon over took and seized power. Stalin and Napoleon both had total dictatorships afterwards. Both also killed many to cover up their mistakes and miscalculations. Neither cared about life, anyone could be sacrificed.
Both leaders over took and seized total control. Although neither of them had much power in the beginning, they quickly arose and took total control with their superior minds. “Sleeping” in the shadows waiting for the perfect moment to grasp it all. When Lenin (or in Animal Farm reference Old Major) die, both leaders and their rivals quickly went to take charge or the Revolution. But Stalin (Napoleon) out maneuvers Trotsky (Snowball) and assumes the role of dictator. They both eliminated their rivals and isolated them.
Both of these powerful dictators killed or had many killed because many of the people apposed them, they caused suffering to those who did not die. “His forced collectivization of agriculture cost millions of lives...” –Internet. “Between 2-7 million people suspected of opposition to Stalin are executed...” –Internet. Napoleon had also killed many of the working people. “The three hens who had been the ring leaders in the attempted rebellion… were slaughtered.” –Animal Farm Napoleon and Stalin killed many for just provoking them.
If the leaders themselves did not kill the people, they were sent to their death. “His political future hung in balance, but he recovered to lead his country to victory. As usual with Stalin, the human cost was enormous, but that mattered little to him” –Internet These two leaders would lead their country into battle and have next to nothing left in the end and still consider it a victory. “...Celebrate our victory!...But they have destroyed the windmill. And we had worked on it for two years!” These two leaders refuse to admit a loss, if they do the people may start another revolution against the leaders themselves.
It is not complete.. Im missing a few paragraphs but I need someone that is very good at english and at the MLA quoting stuff.. Am I doing it right?
“Title here”
“Animal Farm,” written by George Orwell, is an allegory of the Russian Revolution. There were many different and intriguing characters. Including but not limited to Boxer the mindlessly strong horse, Mollie the weak and human dependent horse, and Benjamin the depressed donkey. They all played their valuable roles in Animal Farm and if all of the animals worked together they could have prevented anything terrible from happening, but seeing as they didn’t everything fell apart. And the one that destroyed “Animalism” is Napoleon, a pig, who was modeled after the Historical figure Joseph Stalin. (Animalism is the theory that all animals are created equal) Napoleon, like Stalin, was a “sleeper.” A sleeper is one who appears to be weak but then takes you by surprise and takes over. Neither Napoleon nor Stalin ever made a move until they were ready. Both leaders soon over took and seized power. Stalin and Napoleon both had total dictatorships afterwards. Both also killed many to cover up their mistakes and miscalculations. Neither cared about life, anyone could be sacrificed.
Both leaders over took and seized total control. Although neither of them had much power in the beginning, they quickly arose and took total control with their superior minds. “Sleeping” in the shadows waiting for the perfect moment to grasp it all. When Lenin (or in Animal Farm reference Old Major) die, both leaders and their rivals quickly went to take charge or the Revolution. But Stalin (Napoleon) out maneuvers Trotsky (Snowball) and assumes the role of dictator. They both eliminated their rivals and isolated them.
Both of these powerful dictators killed or had many killed because many of the people apposed them, they caused suffering to those who did not die. “His forced collectivization of agriculture cost millions of lives...” –Internet. “Between 2-7 million people suspected of opposition to Stalin are executed...” –Internet. Napoleon had also killed many of the working people. “The three hens who had been the ring leaders in the attempted rebellion… were slaughtered.” –Animal Farm Napoleon and Stalin killed many for just provoking them.
If the leaders themselves did not kill the people, they were sent to their death. “His political future hung in balance, but he recovered to lead his country to victory. As usual with Stalin, the human cost was enormous, but that mattered little to him” –Internet These two leaders would lead their country into battle and have next to nothing left in the end and still consider it a victory. “...Celebrate our victory!...But they have destroyed the windmill. And we had worked on it for two years!” These two leaders refuse to admit a loss, if they do the people may start another revolution against the leaders themselves.
It is not complete.. Im missing a few paragraphs but I need someone that is very good at english and at the MLA quoting stuff.. Am I doing it right?