poem

[defender]

Felt in the mood to write something. A bit dark but what the hell..it's my current mood.



One last time by Jesse Labrocca
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When you start to feel the rotting of your mind
And it is the flesh that is consuming you.
When you begin to hear your heart beat out of step.
And it is your breathe that is ending you.

When you open your eyes and see the black.
And it is the day you do not see.
When you fall to the ground one last time.
And it is the earth you forever see.
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[Scorch]

breath*

sounds like someone fell in the blue hell in GTA

 

[Pylis]

That.... that was beautiful.

I want to have your baby.

 

[Wshakspear]

One last time by Jesse Labrocca
OR The Ballad of George A. Romero
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When you start to feel the rotting of your mind
And it is the flesh that is consuming you.
When you begin to hear your heart beat out of step.
And it is your breathe that is ending you.

When you open your eyes and see the black.
And it is the day you do not see.
When you fall to the ground one last time.
And it is the earth you forever see.
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[defender]

[quote name='Pylis']That.... that was beautiful.

I want to have your baby.[/quote]

Sorry but 4 is enough for me.

 

[pimp tyranny]

wow, condoms

 

[ZeroSupporT]

Dark.

 

[x0thedeadzone0x]

Very cool defender. I definitely support teh dark poetry.

 

[defender]

[quote name='Scorch']breath*
[/quote]

misspelling was intentional

http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=breathe

You may pronounce it how you feel but dictionary defintion was more appropriate as breathe. Breathe is a verb while breath is a noun. I sort of missused the word as a noun and I tend to do that sometimes and it is usually intentional as is this case.

 

[Wshakspear]

Hey, its Poetry, your not the only one kicking the nads of the English language. Yours was a good use, others, not so much.

 

[O-Dog]

Bravo...dare we ask the source of your inspiration? With 4 bastions of joy (plus the Mrs.) how can such darkness be fostered?

 

[defender]

[quote name='O-Dog']Bravo...dare we ask the source of your inspiration? With 4 bastions of joy (plus the Mrs.) how can such darkness be fostered?[/quote]

Early morning blues..

I had a cup of coffee and feel better now.